This is my newest original song. It's about a brother and a sister who fell in love with each other. Incest Music and lyrics: Liene Narcis 2012.04.20 [Both:]
Obsidian light shines in my eyes Like a veil of disappointment Immensely gray is the dawn With you [Sister:] You are milk for every baby in me For every dragon in me you are sulfur [Brother:] You are a sin for every Judas in me For every predator in me you are flesh [Sister:] You are virginity for every rapist in me For every bird in me you are wings [Brother:] You are nails for every cross in me For every monster in me you are a heart [Both:] Silver darkness blackens in my eyes Like a veil of despair Immensely transparent is the dawn Without you [Sister:] You are a story for every book in me For every vein in me you are blood [Brother:] You are water for every fish in me For every hell in me you are a demon [Sister:] You are a coffin for every corpse in me For every queen in me you are a crown [Brother:] You are a church for every priest in me For every god in me you are a heart [Both:] Wild strawberries are flowing from my wounds So ancient is the hatred between our lips
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Aurora
4/19/2012 08:37:01 pm
Vai, cik burvīga dziesma! Tik rūgta un maiga. Tev vienmēr ir padevušās šādas dziesmas. Tas ir talants - aizskart kāda sirdi ar savu darbu. ļoti skaista dziesma un arī izpildījums. Patiesi šai dziesmai ir pavasara noskaņa. Tādas dziļas ilgas un sāpes ieliktas iekšā no brāļa un māsas. Ļoti neparasta tēma. Lirikas ir ļoti skaistas. Tāda sena sajūta. Liekas, ka viņi ir ārpus pasaules kaut kad viduslaikos katrs pie savas sienas dzied šo skumji dziesmu viens otram.
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Sinmaster
4/19/2012 08:47:07 pm
Liels paldies. Tu jau zini, cik ilgi es mēģināju taisīt šo dziesmu, bet nekādi nevarēju izdomāt, kā ietērpt vārdu mūzikā. Bet vakar man uznāca lielā iedvesma un šodien saliku visu kopā. Liels gandarījums par padarīto. Es zinu, ka šai dziesmai nedaudz trūkst dinamikas, iespējams, tā ir nedaudz par garu un vienmuļu, bet manas dziesmas reti iekļaujas standartos. ^^ Ļoti negribējās nogriezt dziesmu vārdus, kas man pašam šoreiz ļoti patīk, tāpēc atstāju tik garu.
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Aurora
4/19/2012 08:51:35 pm
Man nešķiet, ka dziesma būtu par garu. Tajā ir viss, ko vajag. Spēcīga dziesma. Ja tā aizskar, garumam nav nozīmes. Great job! Klips būtu burvīgi :)
Aurora
4/19/2012 08:39:47 pm
Gribēju vēl piebilst, ka ir burvīga vārdu spēle, kad viens dzied vienu, bet otrs ko citu.
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Sinmaster
4/19/2012 08:49:49 pm
Šī ideja man piedzima nakts melnumā. ^^
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Scrubs2U
5/28/2012 03:52:46 pm
Loved the verse, melody, and the singer. Love is love and they should not be denied. Great piece of work
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Hello, Lady Margoth, first of all i want to express my delight about your voice and the music you sing. You simply put a spell on me. That is the reason for i took the liberty to modify the lyrics of this song and addapt it to my view about music.. here is the link to the song, i would be very happy to know i've let you as charmed as i was listening to your song: http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/15098125
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Sinmaster
11/8/2012 12:24:48 am
Your adaptation is very melancholic and I am quite charmed. It's unusual that someone is making adaptations to my song.
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Hello, Liene, i am glad you liked the song. It may be unusual, but i like your voice so much and the whole ideea of the song was so wonderful that we couldn't help but make a cover after it. We are grateful for this song and we are sorry we did not add a link to this website as a reference, but we did not know how, reverbnation adds the informations automaticaly. What we can do is to upload the song as a youtube video and place there a link. Meanwhile, i will document on google about how to add a custom link to reverbnation so this problem is solved.
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Sinmaster
11/8/2012 01:47:56 am
Anyway, thank you for such interest and good words. Every person who appreciate my work means much to me.
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well, we are a gothic rock band still underground, and as the vocalist of the group i can say i don't sing for popularity, nor money. I sing because its a passion, i put my feelings in every word i sing and that's the best reward i could get. I am only interested in finding the limits of my voice, to explore the bounds of creativity, to collaborate with other people with the same passion for music and beauty. That's all that really matters and when i see a smile on the lips of someone listening my songs, i feel my soul up in the sky and nothing compares to that feeling. We thank you very much for the kind words and can't wish you anything else but success in your activity and all the best thoughts! (P.S. - I appologise i didn't introduce myself too, my name is Ciprian Horeanu, my band name is Gothdream and we are from Romania).
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Sinmaster
11/8/2012 05:44:23 am
Exactly, music is passion that never burns out. Hopefully. It's an art for ears and soul.
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